Mimeslayer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Boxcar City RUSH part1]

You have a strong direction for the comics style, and it seems you've got an interesting twist on reality shuddering apart in places. As a setup it works, it's always hard to say how this exposition should work between characters. I always buck at such direct character dialogue but you're letting the weird stuff unfold in a nice way. It's a big comfy pillow to rely on as crows peck out my eyes.

[Moonlit Castle]

I really like the style, smart simplification and little touches for the distance for a large scene. Part of me wants to say play with the framing/spacing or shape of the rising spire, but also it all works well especially for practice/concept

[Sanford]

Really cool framing, nice poses, textures to add interest to the space are fun.

[Taifau Cafe CH1 (Part 1)]

I like the art, I enjoy seeing the Tazuka influence. After reading the parts I still feel pretty lost in the world, but the art and staging are plenty entertaining,

mogy64 responds:

thank u!
it was hard to find the right balance on how much should i explain about the world and how much should i keep under wraps for future chapters, as it progresses along i hope to make the world more understandable!