I don't want to lie to the police, so I'll say I love this fun little goof.

You have a strong direction for the comics style, and it seems you've got an interesting twist on reality shuddering apart in places. As a setup it works, it's always hard to say how this exposition should work between characters. I always buck at such direct character dialogue but you're letting the weird stuff unfold in a nice way. It's a big comfy pillow to rely on as crows peck out my eyes.

I really like the style, smart simplification and little touches for the distance for a large scene. Part of me wants to say play with the framing/spacing or shape of the rising spire, but also it all works well especially for practice/concept

Really cool framing, nice poses, textures to add interest to the space are fun.